Ruthless Gods by Emily Duncan // Addictive, but very frustrating to read

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Ruthless Gods

by Emily Duncan

eARC, 378 pages

Published April 7th 2020 by Wednesday Books

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Darkness never works alone…

Nadya doesn’t trust her magic anymore. Serefin is fighting off a voice in his head that doesn’t belong to him. Malachiasz is at war with who–and what–he’s become.

As their group is continually torn apart, the girl, the prince, and the monster find their fates irrevocably intertwined. They’re pieces on a board, being orchestrated by someone… or something. The voices that Serefin hears in the darkness, the ones that Nadya believes are her gods, the ones that Malachiasz is desperate to meet—those voices want a stake in the world, and they refuse to stay quiet any longer.

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I received an eARC of this book through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review

Trigger warning: blood, cutting, broken bone, hallucinations

This book is a frustrating but addictive mess.

I have to admit that this book is better than Wicked Saints. I read this book because I love where the story is going, and I did love the plot of this book. It’s not exactly new or unique, but I love how we get to know more on the mythology of the gods and how the questions of divinity are explored. I enjoyed reading about the theologies of Kalyazin, of their pantheon and their beastly figure, of their cold indifference and the rules that bound them. I also love the atmosphere– it is dark and gory, with a lot of blood and bone and darkness present, but also weirdly… sensual. And finally, I admit that I find this book more enjoyable because it departs from the similarities with the Grisha trilogy and started to become a story of its own (though I kinda see the similarities with king of scars, but it’s pretty minor 👀).

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I love the fact that these characters are not easily wooed to the enemy side and still stood for what they believe in and their country, that despite their friendship and romance and allegiance their forged, when the time to choose comes, they will always choose their country. But beside that, the characters are a pile mess.

  • Serefin is woefuly inadequate, he certainly went through a trauma and he had a god messing with his head, but he didn’t even try. We’re always told of how brilliant he was as a soldier and a prince, that he wanted to be a better king, but all he did was drinking, avoiding his nobles and reports and whispers of coup. He didn’t want to spill more blood but his inaction is actually spilling more blood.
  • I’m glad darklina didn’t happen because Nadya is pathetic. No matter how many times Malachiasz betrayed her, no matter the atrocities he committed, and no matter the fact that she knew another betrayal was inevitable, she always yield to him because she can’t see him any other way other than the “anxious, lonely boy”. Seriously, that’s how she sees and describe him all the time. She is also not able to take responsibilities of her action, which reflected in her inability to tell the truth to Kostya. She’s afraid he will be angry at her, but she never give a full explanation and a chance for him to understand her, instead she let him form his own conclusion and when able, she’s blaming circumstances and Malachiasz. 
  • We barely get any chapters from Malachiasz, but I hate him and I do not see any redeeming qualities of his. 
  • But the most important thing: Nadia and Malachiasz are NOT ROMANTIC. I do think their scenes physical scenes together are pretty good, but that’s just the problem. It’s just sensual, fulfilling the dark, sensual aesthetics but they did not have that deep emotional connection (they manipulated and betrayed each other and they know it!!!) as well as that ~romantic vibes~. They’re unable to communicate with each other, constantly cutting/putting blades on each other, and just basically super toxic. 

Honestly, the side characters are more interesting than our main trio. Kacper and Ostiya are finally making their moves (which I love), we got to know more about Rashid and Parijahan (and more about Akola), and we got to know the tsarevna of Kalyazin, Katya. The banter between Serefin, Katya, Ostiya and Kacper as well as Parijahan, Rashid and Malachiasz are honestly my favorite dialogues and dynamics between the characters. Kacper and Parijahan got more development in this book, so I’d love to see more of Ostiya, Katya, and Rashid in the next book!

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Another thing I hate about this book is the repetitive writing. You might have notice that Nadya always describe Malachiasz as a “lonely and anxious boy”, but it’s not only her, it’s the other characters. They all describe him with some variation of “— boy”: sad, brilliant, lonely, nervous, anxious… you name it. And this repetition is not something that applies for describing Malachiasz only (Seriously, how many times do you have to use the word “boy” to describe him? Apparently, the word was used 185 times and 133 of them are in reference of Malachiasz). To build the atmosphere and the setting, this book heavily on repetition of words that coveys the idea of the author’s intention, but did not actually specify any details or visuals.

The most obvious example is instead of explaining the exact setting or sensation the characters are experiencing, the author repeatedly used the same words over and over again. “Somewhat” “something” “bone” “more and much more” “stars” and “blood” are some of the favorites, not to mention “eldritch” and “mad” at the second half of the book. Like when describing churches and cathedrals, we just got icons, pews, bone altar covered in blood or bone covering the floor or bone in the structure. But how does the building felt like (except of feeling boly or scary or divine), what’s the color there, etc was not explained. Same with the Salt Mines- is it a cathedral or a mine? It’s conveniently too dark in the hallways of the Salt Mines- except in the room with the bloody altar. There are also many instances when she “suddenly” felt things or being too close or feeling power too powerful or “somehow” know things, but what does that mean?

Another example, we skip a lot of battle scene, especially where magic is concerned. It’s been two books, but I still don’t understand how the magic work. Nadya felt the power rushed through her, but then what? Any light? Color? Explosion? Or does things just happened and people just disappear? Does she control the magic flowing through her, or does she became a puppet and only use the magic as the gods told her how to use it?

The use of the repeated words certainly builds the aesthetic, but as a reader I felt frustrated and confused. I understand that the characters were in the unknown too so maybe it’s intentional, but I couldn’t 100% understand what was happening at all times as the description just felt incomplete. I felt the same thing with the Raven Cycle, but because the writing was whimsical and the plot has so many fine threads. Here, I feel it’s because the author cannot visualize her intention 100% or doesn’t know how to convey it.

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Overall, Ruthless Gods is a successful sequel in terms of the plot and expanding its mythology. However, the characters and prose had major setback in terms of enjoyment. I’m still interested with the plot, but the writing and characters are such a struggle, I’m both drawn and repealed by them. I guess we’ll see how long the series will go and how I feel when the next book is released.

tasya

 


15 thoughts on “Ruthless Gods by Emily Duncan // Addictive, but very frustrating to read

  1. I’ve literally been struggling to write a review for this book after finishing it because yes it is such a mess, but I still love it. I was so disappointed with Malachiaz and Nadya’s character development because I loved them in the first book, but I do agree – the side characters made up for it. I can’t wait to see how the entire trilogy wraps up but I don’t know how my heart will survive it > _ <

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  2. I admit, I do love an addictive, page-turning book even when they can be frustrating. I guess that is why I actually finished the Throne of Glass series lol. But oh boy, repetitive writing drives me mad. I don’t know if I could handle that. Also, battle scenes, especially those involving magic, are NOT to be skipped over! While this book sounds so interesting, I am sure it would drive me crazy. Awesome review!

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    1. Exactly, battle scenes involving magic is an awesome way for our characters to show their powers and for us readers to see what the magic can actually do, so it shouldn’t be skipped 🙄 I really need to finish ToG but I’m not sure I love the direction of the story 😬

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  3. You know what… I think something you said has hit the nail on the head for me why there are some YA books that I find less than substantial. It’s when you said “the use of the repeated words certainly builds the aesthetic” that clicked in my brain… yes…. this. Not all YA books feel like this but there are definitely some of a certain ilk (I could list but probably won’t) that feels as though they are more written for the aesthetic and written to be a pinterest mood board than an actual storyline. I will admit I haven’t read this series and am probably not going to but I enjoy hearing the different opinions of it.

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    1. Oh that’s an interesting way to say it and it definitely rings true for me too! I can totally imagine this book as a pinterest board, it’s certainly an appealing aesthetic but the problem is, the writing isn’t able to make the “moodboards” into a solid world building. Thank you for reading and commenting, Gerry! 🙂

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  4. I haven’t heard of this book but I think the author sounds familiar! I’m glad you enjoyed even though the writing was too repetitive. I also do find it really frustrating having to read poor descriptions of things in novels, often with repetitive words and adjectives. I have encountered some books facing the same problem!! Happy to hear that you enjoyed this. I’ll take a look at this because I love mythology 🙂

    jillian @ jillian etc.

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